Today - we are going to review the rubric and map your progress on your persuasive essay.  Then, we will discuss conclusions and how to write an effective conclusion.

First - lets revisit the rubric:

	Exceeds the Standard	Meets the Standard	Needs Improvement	Not Evident
Thesis Statement, Ideas, Defining your argument, backing up your argument with proof	Ideas are fresh and original. Thesis is narrow and manageable. Order of development clear and precise and helps development one clear main idea. Hook and thesis connect.   Clear important details for support	Ideas are clear but might be overused.  Topic/ Thesis is fairly board.  Order of develop may ramble and may not back up thesis.  Hook is present but may not connect with thesis.  Support is attempted but not quite fulfilled with specifics.	Paper lacks a central idea or purpose.  Ideas are not developed or seem to go in several directions. Information is limited or unclear. Details are missing.	Not Evident
Organization	Original title. Transitions connect main ideas. Effective opening and ending.  Easy to follow.  Important ideas stand out. Clear beginning, middle and end. Details fit where placed.	Appropriate title. Transitions connect sentence to sentence but not necessary idea to idea.  Good beginning. Attempted ending.  Logical sequencing.  Key ideas are beginning to surface. Readable.	Paper is hard to follow because transitions are weak or absent. There is no clear beginning or ending.  Ideas may not fit together or ramble. Paragraph structure might not be evident.	Not Evident
Voice	Point of view is evident Clear sense of audience Enthusiastic about topic.  Says more than is expected.  Words elicit both ideas and emotions. Work is engaging and persuades	Personal treatment of standard topic. Perspective becomes evident.  Some sense of audience. Conveys ideas to reader.  The writer likes the topic, but is not passionate about it.  Writing persuades in some places	Paper is lifeless, mechanic, stilted. Predictable treatment of topic.  Energy lacking.  Audience could be anyone. Writer is indifferent to the topic.  Does not persuade at all.	Not evident
Word Choice	Precise, fresh, original words. Vivid images. Avoids repetitions, clichés, vagueness.  Use of figurative language. Everyday words are used well.	Uses favorite words correctly. Experiments with new words. Attempts to use descriptive words to create images.	Ordinary and recognizable words.  Language is generic or cliché.  Uses repetitions or relies on slang. Overuse of “to be” verbs.	Not Evident
Sentence Fluency	Consistent use of sentence variety. Sentence structure is correct and creative.  Varied beginnings, varied structures, and varied lengths. Natural flow and rhythm.  Writing is not wordy.	Sentences are usually correct, but some may not flow smoothly.  Simple and compound sentences are present.  Varied beginning. Sections have rhythm and flow. Writing could be cut to avoid wordiness.	Sentences are choppy, incomplete, rambling or awkward. Meanings are not always clear. Words are strung together. Sentences could be extremely wordy.	Not Evident
Mechanics	There may be occasional errors in mechanics (spelling, fragments, run-ons, punctuation, capitalization, usage, etc.). However, it is hard to find errors.	Errors in writing mechanics are noticeable but do not impair readability.	Numerous errors in usage, grammar, spelling, capitalization, and/or punctuation distract reader and impair readability.	Not Evident
Uses of Persuasive Tools	Uses 4 or more tools: expert testimony, quality of reasoning, points out flaws in opposing views, appeal to audience self-interests, radically different topics or new twists on old topics	Uses 2-3 tools.	Relies heavily on one tool.	Not Evident
References and Sources	More than five sources.  All sources of information are noted in correct in-text citation (MLA format) and correct Works Cited page.	Three to five sources. Some sources of information are noted incorrectly or not in MLA format.  Minor problems with Works Cited page.	Less than three sources.  Most information noted incorrectly.  MLA format completely missing.  Many problems with Works Cited page.	Not Evident

Objective: Students will be able to write an effective conclusion.

You will be working on your conclusion.  Today, we will be talking about conclusions and looking at a few sources to help you.

For one view on conclusions go HERE

You can also look at the UNC Writing Center's advice on conclusions by going HERE

Remember, your 2nd draft of your essay is due on Wednesday.   We will put this on the SmartBoard and workshop them.